User:Mitchellweed/Boomerang effect (psychology)/Taybledsoe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mitchellweed


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mitchellweed/Boomerang_effect_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Boomerang effect (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Typically, the more aggressive something is presented, people would more than likely want to do the opposite.
 * I would reword this sentence. "Typically, the more aggressively something is presented, the more likely it is for someone to want to do the opposite."
 * The lead could be fleshed out a little bit more, it does not really address the article's main sections.
 * It would be interesting to see if there has been any research done on persuasive health communications during COVID. I think the boomerang affect probably had a lot of influence on public attitudes towards health recommendations.