User:Mitchlingg/Coach (sport)/Nathanrice14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Mitchlingg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mitchlingg/Coach_%28sport%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Coach (sport)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead of the article is definitely stronger than it was to begin with, but I think she should have listed what the three styles of coaching is in her first paragraph so the readers knew what they were going to be learning about. There is definitely some good content within her article but I think she could potentially add more to it. Maybe an interview or an article that shows three different people that have each experienced the types of coaching so we could get a better understanding of which style works the best. Her tone and balance is very professional, she is not biased, it is organized well, but we so images or media on the article. But over all I think she has great start here and is well on her way to a great article!