User:Mitm0412/Homosexuality in the New Testament/Houstontonorman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

- You are missing a few citations throughout the writing.

- I enjoyed learning about this. You remain super neutral throughout.

- Misspelling of "Ethiopian"

- Maybe elaborate more on Romans 1 mention.

- Maybe more references

- A few formatting issues in the second paragraph. I think you forgot to add a space in the middle.

- From your article, I learned a lot. I am excited to read it after you are complete. I also learned a little more on how to cite in text, which is super helpful. On your third paragraph, the arrow... is that on purpose?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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