User:Miya Johnson/Application essay/Alice.lous Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Miya Johnson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Miya%20Johnson/Application_essay?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Application essay

Evaluate the drafted changes
All the edits flow with the original article, I can't narrow where edits were made so that shows the neutrality found in the article. The sources added are reliable and can be used to further information not relevant enough to be included in the article but relevant for knowledge on the topic. I think the edits made, make the article more complete, it in concise and clear; very easy and informational read.