User:Miya Johnson/Application essay/Ilovedoors195 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Miya Johnson's : Application essay


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Miya Johnson/Application essay


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Miya_Johnson/Application_essay&oldid=1143824947

Evaluate the drafted changes
Everything in the article is relevant to the article topic and there is nothing here that distracted me. The article is neutral and very factual and has many references, however theirs not many citations from where they got the information from. Each fact isn't supported/citied by a reference. The main thing that is missing is those citied references to back up your facts.