User:Mjbmicro/Methanoperedens nitroreducens/Fungus enthusiast Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mjbmicro


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mjbmicro/Methanoperedens_nitroreducens?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Methanoperedens nitroreducens

Lead
The lead is very strong and adds more detail in a better way than the original article. The lead is fairly concise while still containing important information and gives a good introduction of what is to come in the rest of the article. I really liked the Latin meaning breakdown of the species. Only thing I might suggest is stating the two known organisms that are able to couple methan oxidation with nitrate reduction because it would be interesting to know the other one.

Content
The content of the article is well written and offers a good bit of infomation on the organism. The main thing I would edit is some of the wording. For example the sentence in the Ecology section: "Their other competition is those organisms also utilizing nitrate with other carbon sources" is a little informal and undescriptive with the "this" and "those." There also could be some more information int he metabolism section, perhaps describing the metabolism mechanism a little more if possible? There isn't too much to change, so I am throwing things out there.

Other Things
The sources seem fairly up to date, could potentially look for more. They are also used throughout the article and cited accordingly. Nit-picky, but might want to format the "References" heading to be the same as the other headings (just to be consitent). The draft seems to be netural and avoids obvious biases.