User:Mjeffery97/Color psychology/Beckie19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mjeffery97


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Mjeffery97/Color_psychology&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no


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Evaluate the drafted changes
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There was nothing written in their sandbox or bibliography yet. I would advise they get started quickly. I would say that they should start with 3-5 sources and then use those to create a framework for the introduction. For example, who started color psychology, why, how it affects people, etc. Once they have that they can build up with 3-5 more sources to build up their information. I have found some examples of sources online and have included it here: This article deals with color psychology and college students which is perfect for this class as we are all currently college students https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/2158244014525423 I believe it would be an insightful contribution to the color section already outlined in the original article.