User:Mjgirard10/Urban agriculture in Barcelona/Sustainable101 Peer Review

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Mjgirard10
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 * User:Mjgirard10/Urban agriculture in Barcelona
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- The lead, although not titled "lead" gives a strong and informative insight of urban agriculture and what it is.

- The lead broadly discusses some of the topics that were honed in on later.

- The lead has the perfect amount of detail, and incorporates aspects that are within the article.

-The lead is very concise, while also extremely insightful and educational.

- The content seems to be relatively up to date, as it mentions events from 2010 and 2011, however not many later than that.

- All of the content expands upon and pertains to the overarching topic.

-The content is neutral and does not appear to be persuasive in any way.

- The content is solely informative and educational and does not contain arguments or opinions.

- The links appear to work with this article.

- The content has strong sources to back up the information.

- The sources are current and match up with what is discussed in the article.

- Criticism: The article is overall very informative, and gives you strong insight on the history as well as gives you an understanding for urban agriculture in Barcelona. The only thing that could be helpful is images to give readers more of a visual insight of what is being referred to.