User:Mjos02/Alliance of Pan American Round Tables/Jae7419 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Mjos02)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mjos02/Alliance_of_Pan_American_Round_Tables?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alliance of Pan American Round Tables
 * Alliance of Pan American Round Tables

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead of this article is very concise and summarizes the topic. The content added contextualizes the topic and is relevant to the topic. All the sources are used and up to date. There are no images yet, and I do not see another primary source. (If I'm not mistaken, it was two primary sources). I thought the content was concise and well summarized. The new sections really helps the existing article by contextualizing the development of this organization.