User:Mjos02/Alliance of Pan American Round Tables/Stellaeve1515 Peer Review

Hi Maya, based on your intentions outlined in the Wiki blog Canvas assignment, it seems like you have a pretty good and thorough plan to enhance your page. In addition to what you intend to change, I think another sentence or two in the first section/the intro of the page would be super helpful. From an outsider’s perspective, it was a bit confusing to discern what the Alliance of Pan American Round Tables is, so I’m sure this could also be an issue for others in the future if not addressed. It seems like the page didn’t have much for you to work with because of the original editor’s lack of detail, so I think definitely explaining better what the Alliance is exactly will drastically improve the page.

All of the sources listed are credible and all of the links are accessible on my end. Based on what you said about how you want to add a “Work” section, I think something to be mindful of when you write this is to be objective. When one is writing about something they are passionate about, it can be hard to articulate in an objective, neutral manner. I think the work section idea you had in mind would be great for this page and I look forward to seeing your final product!

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