User:Mjshoe/Woodie Salmon/JAMS1801 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mjshoe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mjshoe/Woodie_Salmon?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Woodie Salmon

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * - Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Some parts of the article tend to veer off topic. The section "Ties to Chalkyitsik" in particular seemed a little tangential, and like it could be pared down to focus more on Woodie Salmon himself.
 * - Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The article is written in a neutral, passive tone that seems in line with Wikipedia guidelines and the requirements of the assignment.
 * - Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * The article currently has a section on the subject's voting history. It could go more into his beliefs and affiliations rather than just mentioning his history, if such information is available.
 * - Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * Some of the links were broken, in particular the link to the "Voter's Self Defense System" source took me to the homepage of the site, rather than to a particular article relevant to Woodie Salmon. However, other than this issue it all looks good.
 * - Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * I would say that the writer needs to do another pass through and ensure that all the facts are sourced, particularly in the voting record and Political Career sections.
 * - Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?
 * More information could be added on the current day work or career of Woodie Salmon, but other than that it looks good.