User:Mkaddache/Healthcare in the United States/Riyaaarul Peer Review

General info
(Mkaddache)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mkaddache/Healthcare in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Healthcare in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Hi Mina! Here's my peer review for you,
 * Lead
 * There was not really any lead in this article and no edits were made to it as well.
 * Content
 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes I believe that the added content is relevant to the topic and it highlights the difference racial disparities within healthcare, which was only alluded to in the original article as well as presents very interesting points on how newly developed technologies within American healthcare presents new challenges and literacy inequality between races as well. I think one way to improve this however would be to add in more information on how racial disparities or inequalities are seen through AI in healthcare with more academic sources to back up this claim. One way to do this is by introducing any specific intitiatives that have failed to take into account racial disparities and adding how it can be redesigned to do so.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Although I cannot directly evaluate this since there are no sources cited within the text or in the bibliography, the information regarding AI in healthcare leads me to presume that sources are from the past two decades, however sources should be cited to further solify this claim.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? It is a bit unclear how the particular section/draft that was added fits into history section of this paper. I believe that it poses great value if it were to be added but I think that it is instead better to make it it's own section, perhaps titled "Racial Disparities and Inequalities within Healthcare System and Approaches" with separate subsections would be more effective.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Yes I do believe that this article deals with very important racial/ ethnic inequities that are found within healthcare systems and technologies within the US.
 * Tone and Balance


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes, I believe that the added content has a neutral tone.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?: I would not say that any viewpoints are overrepresented, it seems more as if the viewpoints of the underrepresented races were instead being presented in an unbiased way.
 * Sources and References


 * As of now there are not any sources cited in the draft or any present within the bibiolography so I cannot comment on this.
 * Organization


 * Is the content added well-written - Yes the content was well written and read quite smoothly.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No there are not any errors in spelling or grammar.


 * Is the content added well-organized - As mentioned above I think that this edit would really benefit from being its own section because I don't think that it fits directly in the history section of this paper. Please look at my comments above for further details on this.

Overall impressions


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?/How can the content added be improved? - I think that a few ideas introduced within the article, such as the racial disparities found within AI could've been further added to upon with specific examples. Please refer to the above for a more specific suggestion/comment on this. Besides that I think that the added information on racial disparities is very relevant to this article and overall makes it much stronger and well-rounded.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The strengths of the content added, as I mentioned above is definitely that the added information on racial disparities is very relevant to this article and overall makes it much stronger and well-rounded.

-Riya Arul