User:Mkalarobinson/Organellar DNA/Chloeolivia30 Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Mkalarobinson
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Organellar DNA

Lead
The lead paragraph (in this case, I am referring to the introduction) is non-existent. While the user made significant contributions to the rest of the article, the article would greatly benefit from a introductory paragraph.

Content
The content added is concise and supportive to the article emphasis. I also believe that the pictures added were useful for reference.

Tone and Balance
I think that the article is neutral in tone and is not biased toward points of view.

Sources and References
The links that I checked worked and referred me to either other wikipedia pages and outside website as well. The sources are up to date. The user added sources to previously uncited information as well as added new sources of her own.

Organization
The information presented in the article is all linked to a source (as far as I can track) and the information is a great start to a developing article.

Images and Media
Originally, the article contained no images and the user supplemented images into the article that are relevant and helpful.

Overall impressions
Overall, the article has been greatly improved and the contributions made by the user are supportive and helpful. While the article still has many improvements and additions to be made, the contributions made are useful for the article as a whole.