User:Mkerr30/Schizotypal personality disorder/Cheyanneking10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Mkerr30

Griffin & William - schizotypal personality disorder


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Whp053/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schizotypal personality disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the history you added and I think this will help give more background on the current article. The treatment and therapy are also good additions. I do think you could elaborate on the study more so readers can get a better understanding of what actually occurred in the study and how/why the therapy was successful in the study. I think the diagnosis portion of the article could use some work next, so you could maybe add that to your draft as well.

I would also try finding more than one reference for the history to ensure accuracy and maybe pull information from both sources.

Adding to the affect portion of this article as well would be nice as they briefly touch on it and I think this is a big topic for schizophrenia. You did good on finding recent articles! Overall doing good, just need more added in my opinion and then you can work on constructing the wording and flow.