User:Mkf51/Race Suicide/Clr127 Peer Review

General info
Mkf51, joyy.c, MeghanBedi
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mkf51/Race Suicide
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Race suicide

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the lead does a good job introducing the topic and its importance. The article was definitely well organized, and all the information felt like it was in the right place in a logical order. The sources added seem good. You might want a source for the first paragraph of the language section, and for the last two sentences of the first paragraph of the “Race Suicide in the US” section. The last sentence in hypersexualization section definitely sums up the section well but might feel a little like drawing a conclusion.