User:Mkoch21Fox/African scarification/AdriN070 Peer Review

I really enjoyed the introduction because it is very clear on what the article is about and gave background on what the importance and meaning of scarification is to African culture. The rest of the article flows well into different topics and with providing more information. The only thing I see is the last sentence of the first paragraph, “African tattoos are rarely representative, which makes determining their meaning and background difficult, but we know magical practices are linked directly to the functionality of the tattoo”. It would be good to reword the sentence, so that it does not say “we know”. Overall, good work!

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