User:Mkoch21Fox/African scarification/Ficklepickle311 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Mkoch21Fox)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mkoch21Fox/African_scarification?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I appreciated all the different examples you included in your draft, especially under the "symbolism" subheading. I'm curious about the difference between male circumcision and 'female genital mutilation'. To my understanding they both are a process of circumcision? But, I could be wrong. I am also curious about why tattoos are mentioned in the beginning of the article and why they are relevant to the topic of scarification. Other than those small things I think your article looks good! You have strong sources and no bias I can see.