User:Mkoch21Fox/African scarification/PacificBelle19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mkoch21Fox, BellabsDreamLab, Bhaley16


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * African scarification


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African scarification

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article itself does well with displaying a neutral tone with the overall writing, but I feel like in certain areas, like when talking about the art maybe read it out loud to see if there is any bias. Everything is backed by a source which is good and shows that everything comes from a scholar. I would say that the article would benifit from more images because I feel like the way certain scarification practices and designs are talked about, the visual aide of a picture will be very helpful. Overall very good job and I took notes on what you have and should be added to my draft.