User:Mkoch21Fox/African scarification/Sketchy Bee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mkoch21Fox


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mkoch21Fox/African_scarification?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African scarification

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you picked a really interesting topic and that this is a good introduction, but the exsisting article is already so long, I would focus on something specific that you can add to the information that already exists. I notice that some of the subsections talking about specific cultures are pretty small (some even a sentence long), so maybe you can focus on a few of those specific cultures and add some substance to those.