User:Mkoster1/Joel Robinson (graphic designer)/Iza.pieniadz Peer Review

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mKoster1


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 * User:Mkoster1/Joel Robinson (graphic designer)


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 * Joel Robinson (graphic designer)

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I think you did a really good job and found a lot of info (way more than I was able to find on my architect!). My suggestions and questions are below:

After attending an unidentified high school in New York City

Were you able to find anything post 1952, or about his later career? It would help fill out the career section more.

Ebony magazine again featured the young designer Joel Robinson in an article entitled "Wealthy Bachelors."

- when was he featured previously?

Collections: are you able to link to the objects on their respective websites?