User:Mkretzsch/Gamification/Agulyard Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewin

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Mkretzsch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Mkretzsch
 * https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Mkretzsch

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think overall the article is great. I think the tone and balance is somewhat neutral but if you were to provide other facts it would make it even more so. Your content is great as well and concise as a matter of fact, I was taking notes as I was reading it. I think your sources are very reliable as well and were easy to click for link access. Overall great article so far.