User:Mksearcy/Anorexia nervosa/Aford4706 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mksearcy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mksearcy/Anorexia nervosa


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anorexia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I think that the lead could be edited down, as it seems excessively long and wordy, with in-depth descriptions that are more applicable in their appropriate subheadings.
 * The language used in the behavioral symptoms could be changed from just "food restriction" to "food/energy restriction" as that is the distinction made in the reference you use.
 * The behavioral symptoms subheading should also include information about the use of enemas and excessive use of dieting practices, as stated in your referenced article
 * Physical symptoms and other applicable areas of the article could have language changed from "loss of menstruation" to "loss or significant change to menstruation"
 * The content added is relevant to the area it has been added and makes an important distinction under this subheading.
 * The reference used seems up-to-date, accurate, and relevant, though more references could be included.