User:Mlclark1/Black women filmmakers/Cruckert Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Mlclark1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Black women filmmakers
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black women filmmakers
 * Black women filmmakers

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead -


 * No. No content has been added by my peer.
 * Yes. It states how black women filmmakers have contributed to the history of films.
 * No. It does not discuss the structure of the article.
 * Yes. It gives a breakdown of how many black filmmakers there were and how many of them were female in the field.
 * The lead is overly detailed in the information which it provides through the use of figures and statistics

Content -


 * Yes. The article discusses the early pioneers of black filmmakers. It then expands on individual decades beginning with the 1990's.
 * Yes. The timeframe of 2020 is included in the article.
 * Yes. The article discusses early pioneers of African American Filmmakers in the early 1900's and then skips to discussing the 1990's. The article should include something of reference between 1900's and 1990's.
 * Yes. It discusses African American filmmakers.

Tone and Balance


 * Yes. The article is descriptive without presenting a    biased tone.
 * No.
 * No. The article is descriptive and mainly list information for the reader. There are no viewpoints taking in the article.
 * No. No viewpoints are presented in the article.

Sources and References


 * Yes. All information is citied.
 * Yes. All sources contain information which is cited.
 * Yes. All sources are related to the subject of African American filmmakers.
 * Yes. A majority of sources are from 2020 to current. There are a few which are from 1994.
 * Yes. The sources have multiple authors and are represent multiple viewpoints on the subject.
 * No. Information being presented is obtained from good sources which are addressing the content being presented.
 * There were 2 citations whose links did not work.

Images and Media


 * No images are included in the article.
 * No images are included in the article.
 * No images are included in the article.
 * No images are included in the article.

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Overall


 * Yes. The listing provided gives a better understanding of the impact of African American filmmakers and the roles they have taken through history.
 * The strengths of the articles show how African American filmmakers are playing a greater role in filmmaking.
 * The best way improvements can be made to the article is to further expand on the timeline which is being presented. Currently the article starts in the early 1900's and then skips to the 1990's. There is a lot of information currently missing which can be added to the article and provide a better understanding of the contributions made by African American filmmakers to society.