User:Mlhammond/Christian views on environmentalism/JamieB1719 Peer Review

General info
Mlhammond
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mlhammond/Christian_views_on_environmentalism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Christian views on environmentalism

Evaluate the drafted changes
This was very well-written - you maintained an objective stance on Lutheran views on environmentalism, while showing what parts of the Bible they might use to back up their claims. As for it being current, well, the Bible is ancient, but it is what Lutherans base their environmental philosophy upon. I know that I am getting back to you late on this one, but I would love to see evidence that Lutherans use these verses to back up their stance - where did you find out they use these verses, and how they use these verses? I appreciate that you filled a gap that was in this article - I took a look, and there is very little written about Lutheran environmental views on this page! The only criticism I have is that you may want to back up your statement that Lutherans use these bible verses, and find them especially important.