User:Mlkoon7155/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Church of Divine Science

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is loosely related to my Historiography final paper.

Evaluate the article
The leading paragraph concisely explains the early history and creator of the Home College of Divine Science. It does not explain how the College turns into the Church, but is otherwise helpful. The article seemed to have mainly positive points and stories in favor of Divine Science, but this could be because that is all that can be found about the topic. There didn't seem to be a whole lot of information on the topic in this article, with only 4 sections. Each section only had one paragraph, not including History, which has two subsections with two paragraphs each. There's a few pieces of information missing citations as well. The Talk page was difficult to read through, with arguments about references and tiny bits of information that do not require a long debate. Overall, the article could use a more fleshing-out and less bickering in the Talk page.