User:Mlproffitt/Dodie Clark/Kanagawar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Mlproffitt


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mlproffitt/Dodie_Clark?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dodie (singer)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi, I that you could include the struggles of being a bisexual woman, in her time, in the music industry. I'm not sure how her sexuality would impact her music career over in England, that would also be good to include. I also think you could include how she might have helped other individuals by using her platform.