User:Mm17t/Sensory integration therapy/Israghanim Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mm17t


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mm17t/Sensory_integration_therapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sensory integration therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall great draft you are off to a very nice start. The lead seems to be concise and to the point. I however did not notice any reference to sources or citations from the information provided. The content added is neutral and relevant to the topic. I would reorganize the information/thoughts added to the theoretical concepts. There were no grammatical or spelling errors that I noticed. Excited to see how the article will look with added information and images!