User:Mmae101/Medical deserts in the United States/TaliaUrb Peer Review

General info
Mmae101
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mmae101/Medical deserts in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Medical deserts in the United States
 * Medical deserts in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

''I really like your overall idea of adding a section that refers to older people in medical deserts. I feel like it was a much-needed perspective. I feel like it needs one more sentence to really bring your idea full circle. Maybe you could add the added difficulty of transportation for elderly people or maybe expand on the types of chronic conditions that typically affect older people that would require more frequent hospital/doctor visits. Maybe include the statistic from your first source about 22% of older adults that live in rural areas. Overall job well done, and I think it adds a lot to the article!''