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Jackie Aina's wikipedia article is a class B article on wikipedia. I choose this article because she is one of my favourite youtubers. My preliminary impression was satisfied that her work and collaboration with top beauty companies is being highlighted. I believe representation matters and diversity is an important aspect that all women should value since not all women have been included or considered in the beauty industry. Following Jackie Aina on social media is liberating because of what she stands for which makes her a notable beauty icon. Reading through the article multiple times, there is enough information on her movement in the beauty industry and involvement for a wiki page, but not enough content on her personal life. The lead section gives readers a concise review on Jackie Aina's background, her date of birth, background, occupation and her involvement in the cosmetic industry which is vital to her line of work. The lead section has a very basic full introductory sentence. It is a concise overview of who she is and readers can get a full understanding of what she is involved in. It also clearly describes the article's topics by mentioning the main beauty industry affiliations she's involved in, that the article covered in the major sections. The lead does not include any unnecessary information that the rest of the article does not cover. The lead should include some more detail considering the extensive community work and involvement Jackie Aina has been apart of.

The content in Jackie Aina's article throughout the various sections have all been relevant to the topics presented in the lead. The content on Aina's wiki page focuses more on her collaborations and advocacy instead of her brand and work. Reading though the wiki page and personally knowing a lot about Jackie Aina, some of the content seems to be missing. The content of her early life should be expounded on. This article fails to mention her real name is Jacelyn Lonje Olayiwola Oyeshola Bolayemi Aina. According to biography mask.com it also includes her Nigerian heritage, nationality and tribal descent. This is important for readers to know and understand why she is an advocate for women of colour. The article captures who she was, after she made a name for herself and not much of her past or heritage. Considering Aina is a notable social media mogul and being very open on all of her platforms, there have been interviews and verified sources of her directly shedding light on her early life while she was in the United States Army reserve and that is an important aspect in her life. The content in her early life should provide more information and background about her family and upbringing since this article should be focusing on the entirety of the individual. She also has a younger sister Flolake Aina, active in the beauty industry and who's also a social media influencer that the article failed to mention. Aina has a close relationship with her sister and has influenced her sister to begin advocating for diversity for women of colour. In the article, there's a lot of weight on the work she's done to change the course of the diversity in the beauty industry by providing inclusion for women of colour. There's also a lot of information on the content of her advocacy and collaboration. However, there's not enough information on her personal brand. There seems to be a few missing content on behalf of her brand that should be included for the quality of of the Wiki page.

The tone of the wiki article is neutral and unbiased as it explains Jackie's work and collaborations. There doesn't seem to be any (heavy) biased towards a particular position. The content highlights the diversity and representation concerns that Jackie Aina addresses for women of colour in the beauty industry, which is imperative to reflect the truth for her work of advocacy for women of colour. Jackie's viewpoints were accurately and unbiasedly represented. The article does not attempt to persuade the readers from one position or another or in any way. This article unbiasedly explains Jackie's work and advocacy in the beauty industry for women of colour. In the beginning of the Advocacy section, "As a champion for diversity" came off as biased at first but after rethinking the choice of words I felt like the content provided which reflects Jackie's work of advocacy for diversity well represents it. It's also

The sources and references back up what is being claimed in the content. However, many sources were backed from unreliable press sources like magazines and blog posts. Many sources were blogging websites like Allure or Bustle and magazine brands like Essence, Elle, Glamour and Refinery 29. There were only a couple credible sources like Yahoo news and Entrepreneur news. All of the links gives readers access to that resource. All of the content was accounted for. There are more sources available through sites like Forbes who unbiasedly reports the income and achievements of entrepreneurs like Jackie Aina. After doing brief research, there aren't any books, textbooks, literature reviews or publication of Jackie Aina yet. The sources that are on the wiki page are currently up to date based on newspaper, online news and blog magazine posts. Sources all reflect and adequately represent the topic and viewers receive a spectrum of authors who have written pieces for magazines on Aina and have interviewed her. There is are websites like biographymask.com and others that claim her net worth and other facts that the Wiki article does not claim. E.g Her real name.

The organization and writing quality is good and easy to read. There's nothing extravagant but is it concise and clear. The writing in this article explains Jackie's movement as an entrepreneur and advocacy in the social justice realm. The article very clearly and explains the conversations that have been publicized which created social impact. There are no grammatical errors and it the topics are well organized. Each section from the lead, to the early career, advocacy, collaboration etc. Have been well written. The Advocacy section and collaboration have been well expounded on. I also gives readers a timeline of when she started her advocacy work and partnerships with various makeup brands to promote diversity. The article is sectioned and organized to see what viewers should know and what's important. The article does not contain any visuals or pictures whatsoever.

The talk page shows the interest of the following wiki projects which include the African Diaspora, Arts and entertainment, military history, women and more. The article has been rated by other (all) wiki projects as a B-class, and few noted it as low-importance. There hasn't conversations on the talk page yet.

My overall impression of the article was good but I felt that there was more room for improvement. Due to the article's status being Class B, I find there it's underdeveloped and there's more room for room for additional and updated information on Jackie Aina's life. One of the article's strengths is focusing on Jackie's advocacy for women of colour in the makeup industry. It highlighted her criticisms, the responses and social impact it made that will allow readers to understand why she is so notable. The Advocacy content in the article gives me the impression that it represents her stance which is the truth about diversity in the makeup industry. One of the article's weaknesses is not including more background of Jackie Aina, like her full name or Nigerian Heritage. The article is incomplete and still has more to develop with Aina's ongoing beauty projects and personal life.