User:Mmckittrick0564/Disability rights movement/Aslowstory Peer Review

General info
Mmckittrick0564
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mmckittrick0564/Disability rights movement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Disability rights movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a really interesting article to be evaluating. You have provided some great bibliographic sources that I think will enhance the quality of the section you are working on and the overall article itself. You write in an informed yet digestable manner, which I think is essential to creating a good wikipedia article. My only element of concern would be the language used in the second sentence, which seems a bit opinionated, but if that is the tone of the article then I trust your judgement and analytic ability! I'm looking forward to reading the next updates of your draft.