User:Mmckittrick0564/Disability rights movement/Yifancai Peer Review

General info
Mmckittrick0564
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mmckittrick0564/Disability rights movement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Disability rights movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated to reflect the new content added.

The content added is relevant to the topic, and up-to-date. There is no content that is missing or does not belong. The content added is neutral, and no claims seem to be heavily biased toward a particular position. No overrepresented or underrepresented viewpoints.

The new added content is not backed up by any secondary source of information yet.

The content added is well-written and has no grammatical or spelling errors.

The article seems more complete but the strengths of the content added is a bit hard to tell with no supporting secondary sources.