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Emetophobia


 * Lead section simply defines what emetophobia is
 * Following paragraph does not have any citations, could come off biased without evidence.
 * Does not thoroughly state what will be discussed throughout the article
 * I do feel like the Assessment section could be removed from the article- one of the sources is removed and there isn't a lot of information provided in this section
 * A handful of the sources are outdated
 * After reading the article, I do not think it is biased
 * No I think there could be more cited evidence. There are multiple lines without citations.
 * There is a diverse group of authors
 * The article could be organized much neater, it also sounds choppy in certain sections, and is wordy
 * Sections can be condescend together
 * The talk section consists of people who experience emetophobia and either disagree with the article or agree with the article

Emetophobia

I took out the word irrational, given that this can come off as biased and offensive to people that suffer from emetophobia.

Practicing Citations


 * learned how to add a citation
 * learned how to reuse the same citation
 * learned how to create a reference header