User:Mmhaque3/Aladdin (1958 film)/Khernandezumanzor Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

-Mmhaque3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * -https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mmhaque3/Aladdin_%281958_film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * -Aladdin (1958 film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I can tell this person wanted to add a better perspective of what the movie Aladdin was all about, while also using references from the book as well (even though the article was about the movie plot, not the books…). Though I do see what they were trying to say and they definitely did follow along with their article topic, but it can be written a little bit better. This person should re-read their work and correct the grammar; Plus something about their sentence structure was off, which made it difficult to read this draft. Another error was seen with the usage of the citations. Only one of the links used was properly cited, while the rest didn’t provide a link or a proper citation. Also the sources used doesn’t seem 100% reliable especially the first one, but it was from linked in so I’m not entirely sure of it’s creditability. That’s something I would have checked over or reviewed.