User:Mmille12/Abu'l-Hasan (artist)/Gheizer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mmille12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mmille12/Abu'l-Hasan_(artist)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Abu'l-Hasan (artist)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello @Mmille12! Excited I got to review your article! Here is my feedback :)

Lead
The lead you have gives a brief overview of what you expand upon in your biography. I am wondering if there is a way to integrate the two?

Content and Organization
I love that you gave an artist who isn't covered on Wiki a new voice! I think overall you took on a hard task in doing so, as there are a ton of directions you could have headed. Think that with the current organization you have, there is an opportunity to dive deeper into your subsections. Specifically, I think the biography could be expanded in some potentially super neat ways! Perhaps exploring more of why he was favored—was it the European influence you touched upon? How does his work contribute to the development of Mughal paintings more broadly?

Finally, I think from both an organization and context perspective, adding very brief descriptions of the Wiki pages you linked would help clarify and make the article flow better. I found myself having to click and read the outside pages pretty frequently, and think a mindful incorporation of these links rather than reference, would be awesome.

Tone and Balance
Crushing. It. Thought your article was neutral and objective. Plus I want to reiterate the fact that you wrote about an underrepresented artist—very cool!

Sources and References
The sources you used look credible and diverse, and reflects great care in diving deeper than a quick search on Google Scholar. One question I had was how you incorporated these sources. I don't think I saw any footnotes in your article and think it may be worthwhile to add those citations!

Images and Media
I'm OBSESSED with the way you curated this mini collection. The art you referenced directly was placed in an accessible, eye-catching way. Additionally, I appreciate the thought put into the gallery at the end of the section. Nice job!

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Following Wikipedia's Notability requirements, here are some items of note:


 * Wiki defines "Significant coverage" as "addressing the topic directly and in detail, so that no original research is needed to extract the content"
 * I think further incorporating your links as mentioned above, may be a simple fix to taking the research to contextualize these topics off the reader
 * Think your article meets the criteria of "Presumed", "Independent of the subject", and "Reliable"
 * One other area that could be expanded upon within the Notability requirements is sources. Since you chose to do a new article, perhaps there is room to find more sources if not directly pertaining to Abu'l Hassan, maybe related to him?
 * Great job with linking this to other articles for more views! Structure feels like a pro Wiki page!

Overall impressions
Overall, great job! Think that the topic is niche and underrepresented, props for bringing his work to the forefront:) The framework is there, can't wait to see where you go by expanding upon your existing work!