User:Mmillerk/Ettore Sottsass/Jessicalidberg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mmillerk, Kerstinagnew, Robynmunzer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ettore Sottsass
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ettore Sottsass

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, great additions to the article. I think it was written well and in Wikipedia's voice, meaning it didn't seem biased or rambled.

Be careful with restating facts as it can seem very repetitive to the user. Its sometimes hard to notice duplicate facts when you're writing so I would suggest just quickly reading through the article once you've added everything you wanted.

Remember to add sources to make the article more reputable as well.