User:Mminerp3/Mueang Fa Daet Song Yang, Thailand/LZU21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mueang Fa Daet Song Yang, Thailand: Lilianavanzuptphen and Mminerp3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mminerp3/Mueang_Fa_Daet_Song_Yang%2C_Thailand?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) - N/A
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) - N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is looking really good so far; I appreciate the detailed amount of content that is included with each section. The formatting all looks really good, but it looks like the first section may have spacing that is different than the rest; in terms of formatting citations, I think you need to provide citations within your article, in addition to the references section. Other than that, the formatting looks great! I think your headers highlight the important aspects of the site quite well, but I think a conclusion section at the very end might be nice, so that there is a specific section that highlights the most important points. Besides those few points, I think this article is looking really good and I'm excited to see your finished article!