User:Mmorales38072/Fernando Llort/CGstarecu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mmorales38072


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mmorales38072/Fernando_Llort?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fernando Llort
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fernando Llort

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead hasn't been updated to reflect the new content yet, I think that would be a good idea to do at some point considering the amount of new content you're adding.

Content

The content is definitely relevant to the topic, as it is elaborating on Llort's life and practice in greater detail than the original article seemed to do.

Tone and Balance

The content added seems to be from a neutral viewpoint, and the viewpoints have a balance between using sources from in and out of wikipedia.

Sources and References

The sources added are fairly current, with some being from the late 90s and some being from 2015 to the past couple of years, and even a source from this year.

Organization

The article is well-written for sure, the organization flows well and the language used has been very good so far. The sections that are there feel necessary and also important to have. One thing I would say though, is maybe taking the past tense form from the original article and adopting it here in these edits (like "where he is said to study" --> "where he studied", or "he would feel a disconnect from his culture" --> "he felt a disconnect from his culture").

Overall impressions

The content added has definitely improved the article from its previous form; there is a lot more information about Llort's life and art practice that is also sorted out in an easy-to-read way. The article feels more complete now. I think it would be a good idea to add more onto the "artistic practices" section as time goes on.