User:Mmoto6/Janus kinase inhibitor/Merelyscience Peer Review

General info
Mmoto6
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mmoto6/Janus kinase inhibitor
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Janus kinase inhibitor

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems as if what you have added could use a slight introduction. If you are just sandboxing this to add it into a part of the original wiki page then the original wiki page introduction to Janus Kinase Inhibitor may work, but right now it just jumps right into the topic and can be confusing to readers who don't know about the topic. I also think some of your sentences need ciatations added to them, particuarlly what you have bolded. I think the what is in the sandbox so far has a neutral tone to it. So far I think you are on the right track to contributing solid knowledge to this wikipedia article, keep up the good work!!