User:Mmpqv5/Black maternal mortality in the United States/EmilyInman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mmpqv5


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mmpqv5/Black maternal mortality in the United States


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black maternal mortality in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your first Article Body is well organized and concise. The first sentence highlights the content of the information to follow. Your proposed examples of Sarah Bartmann and Henrietta Lack's challenges fits well with the statement about Black women's bodies being exploited.

There are a few phrasings of sentences that I would revisit in order to ensure fluidity. Great job organizing your points and potential solutions for the Black maternal morality rate at the end of your revisions.