User:Mmswens/Web skimming/Amcappi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mmswens


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mmswens/Web_skimming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Web skimming

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article explains the methods of web skimming well but the language is a bit too casual. I would suggest changing "Web skimming, which can also be referred to as digital skimming" to "Web skimming, also be referred to as digital skimming," as well as editing the sentence directly after to something more akin to "Web skimming became more widely recognized after the 2018- cont." The second paragraph should also try to remove references that make it seem as if the author is writing towards the reader ( remove "steal valuable information from you" could change you to victims) There are also no sources for the two methods of web skimming or a reference for the attack on British Airways. The last sentence is a good example on what the rest of the draft should try to look like. Overall, I don't think it's a better start but the language needs to be tweaked and there has to be more references.