User:Mmurdockgcsu/Aquatic invasive species in Canada/Polydeuces1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mmurdockgcsu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mmurdockgcsu/Aquatic invasive species in Canada - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exist
 * Aquatic invasive species in Canada - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article was really articulate with the information it was presenting about the different species. I was able to understand exactly how these invasive species where harmful to their retrospective areas. The use of linking the scientific name was also a good inclusion as it allows the reader to do more research if they so choose. Everything was order well and easy to follow, and there are a decent number of references. The author also did a good job at picking credible sources. This article does not make any false claims on anyone's behalf, nor did it try to influence the reader by leaving out any information's. The one thing that this article is lacking would be another entry for the freshwater section. I also wish that they ended up talking more about how these fish got into their environment, and that they used sources for more than one talking point. The information in this article could be added to my article in the sense that once an oil spill happens and hurts a species it could allow for another species to take over