User:Mnamuduri/Moloko language/23alexx Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isand4, Adia09, Cbries2, Mnamuduri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mnamuduri/Moloko_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Moloko language

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is coming along nicely. I think they can add more in the phonology section if it's possible. Finding information on an endangered language is hard, but you can tell they are working very hard. The lead that they added was good, it added a bit of background to the people who speak this language. The content they added was neutral and didn't sway to a certain side. There sources are also pretty recent. The article is moving in a good direction, some parts of the article can be expanded on, but other than that it's great.