User:Mnamuduri/Moloko language/Emartinez203 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mnamuduri, Cbries2, Adia09, Isand4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mnamuduri/Moloko_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Moloko language

Evaluate the drafted changes
On the article page, the lead section has a lot of information. In comparison with a lot of other articles, this lead is pretty solid. If possible, more information about the development and historical origins of the language could help improve the section, although depending on the sources this may not be possible. The information on the sandbox is good too, and it's nice that it's also referenced. On the article itself, maybe it would be nice to add sections of phonology, like more information about constants and vowels and their manner of articulation, place of articulation, etc.