User:Mnamuduri/Moloko language/Sduran2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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Mnamuduri/Moloko Language

Cbries2, Adia09, Isand4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mnamuduri/Moloko language
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Moloko language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

For the lead I would say to probably add what are the different ethnic groups. I also looked over the Wikipedia article and the content seems to cover what the language is. But I would say to add more information to the phonology section. As well to add other sections to the article bodies. The article seems to be neutral is not biased. The content that was added to the sandbox seems to be neutral as well.