User:Mnamuduri/Moloko language/SonaniVandan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mnamuduri, Cbries2, Adia09, Isand4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mnamuduri/Moloko_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Moloko language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

While reading the Moloko language article, everything seems to be well organized with a content table to directly lead you to a specific topic that you're possibly looking for as well as keeping everything cited for each sentence. The lead also gives a brief summary of the background of the language as well as some key insights of origins. The content added surrounding the phonology also helps people trying to learn the language, as to how it is spoken and its rules change the language. Pictures would be a good way to help the reader get some clear insight of where the language is spoken as well as some phonology charts.