User:Mnbkv6/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Solar eclipse of May 29, 1919

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It seemed like a cool event that would have some importance with Einstein's predictions and the page was relatively short.

Evaluate the article
To start the review, the lead section lacks a lot of information explaining why this specific eclipse was so special. It is also kind of clunky because it lists all the countries that the eclipse was visible from. It starts to talk about Einstein but it never really talks about why it is important and what this eclipse proved. The article seems to have a balanced tone and the links are from reputable sources and work. The organization isn't great but I feel like there isn't enough to the article yet to need to be super organized. It has a few pictures that look good and contribute to the page, however, the talk page is almost non-existent and the only conversation doesn't talk about improving the page. My overall impression is that this article needs quite a bit of work, but that makes sense due to it being a start-class.