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Activity 1 - Quality and Importance Ratings in WikiProjects The wikipedia page I found was Balsamic vinegar of Modena which is classified as a start-class, i.e. the page is still largely incomplete. Through reading the page, I found a few possible improvements for the page:


 * 1) There is a large lack of referencing throughout the entire page. Each paragraph has at most one reference with some having none altogether furthermore, looking through the four references provided, I found that one was a short pdf document, two online articles and one which did not work at all. Therefore, to improve Balsamic vinegar I suggest finding both more reliable sources and just more in general.The wording of the sentences is quite rigid and awkward, almost like they are statements strung together to make a paragraph. This may suggest close paraphrasing from the sources or could just need editing to make the sentences flow more smoothly.# There is not much content with only four sections of information. To improve this page to an A-class article, much more information will be needed.
 * 2) There are a few typos which also need to be fixed.

Activity 2 - Citation Needed

I added an additional references needed tag to Gundelfingen and gave a brief explanation for why it is needed in the article's talk page.

Talk:Gundelfingen