User:Mnj02/West Greenlandic/KarinaD311 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mnj02


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 * User:Mnj02/West Greenlandic


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey! For the West Greenlandic article, I’d definitely suggest a structure of the language section, as well as more information on the mixed trade language mentioned in the last part of the history section. Also, is the language endangered? If so, what is replacing it? The first sentence of the lead is a little long; it makes up almost the entire lead. In the history section, Danish is mentioned alongside regional dialects of Greenlandic. Is Danish another regional dialect? If it’s not, it’s not entirely relevant for an article on Greenlandic. The bit in the history that mentions West Greenlandic being nearly identical to modern Greenlandic- is West Greenlandic not modern or standard? The language map in the little chart to the right is interesting; Greenlandic being related to Inuit is a fascinating bit of knowledge. Overall, I’d add more mentions in the lead that are intended to be in the article, such as useable and maybe linguistic structure. Your additions so far really help support the article, the final result will be informative and amazing :)