User:Mo791/Jennifer Wortman Vaughan/Priyathakore Peer Review

Lead


 * Since this is a new page, the lead was created
 * It is clear and informative
 * There is a brief description of the articles sections

Content


 * Content added is extremely relevant
 * Content is up to date using information from 2019 and 2021
 * Gap in smaller, lesser-known academic topics/women in technology
 * Reader learns about Wortmann's education and career accomplishments

Tone and Balance


 * The tone is overall neutral
 * Underrepresentation in her personal life, majority/all is about career

Sources and References


 * Yes all sources are reliable and working links
 * As diverse as the sources can get

Organization


 * Two sections and the Lead
 * Academic Biography
 * Awards and Honors
 * Easy to follow, clear structure
 * Maybe could add another section about her personal life

Images


 * No images
 * Maybe add picture of her, her work, awards

Overall Impressions


 * Great page! A lot of wonderful information on her and her work. The page is a great representative of everything she has accomplished.
 * Since New Article:
 * link is discoverable
 * good range and sources
 * Not included under the What Wikipedia is not policy
 * meets the GNG criteria

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mo791/Jennifer Wortman Vaughan


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jennifer Wortman Vaughan

Evaluate the drafted changes
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