User:Moaazlafi/Hilal Khan Ghazi Mosque/N hatem2001 Peer Review

General info
Moaaz Al-Alfi
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Moaazlafi/Hilal Khan Ghazi Mosque - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead reflects the new content added and there is an introductory sentence, but it doesn’t have a brief description of the major sections mentioned later.

Content

The content is relevant and well-explained. It has so many interesting details and historical facts to delve into, and is also easy to skim through.

Tone and balance

The content was written in a neutral tone and states no personal opinions or viewpoints of any parties.

Sources and References

I see a lot of resources but some of them are indirectly relevant to the building such as the last resource providing information about the history of Jaalis in India. The jaalis in the article were mentioned briefly and only once in the prayer hall section.

Organization

I like the organization. The article is divided into sections and I didn’t see any grammatical errors. Great job.

Images and media

There are a lot of visuals, and they are well captioned but non of them give credit to the original photographer or the reference where they were obtained.

Overall impression

The article has many strong points. Great Job, Moaaz. Keep up the good work.